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Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby LostMyHeadache » Mon Jan 10, 2011 5:40 am

Someone else had previously made this post, but it died, and, as I am
not a Necromancer of threads, I figured I would just post Version 2.0

So yeah, I've got a couple haikus to start with, and I'll post sone more as they come to me.

I know we have a few creative writers here, it would be awesome to see some contributions from you guys.

Without further ado:

A chill Wind blows here
Silver bones lie at my feet
For Phantoms I wait.

Agonized, the damned
Unnerve in the narrow halls
Beware, bells ring out.

Stone and fire, all
Tunnels make beehives of rock
He Who Lurks awaits.

Mighty Dragons here
Demonic Knights their vanguard
Phalanx bars the Path.

Filth and pestilence
Weaken and demoralize
Pure Faith corrupted.

More to come soon!
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby Soul Remains » Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:46 pm

I wrote some stuff for that old thread but I never got around to posting it. When I'm not connected I write stuff in text files and some of it never gets posted. I know I know, humanity weeps lol.

ominous dark skies
steel meets bone,bone meets cold floor
rolling is no more

first time in five one
easy troll across the bridge
OH SHIT! THIS ONE'S HUGE!

kind witch is grateful
teaches magic so freely
sorry need foe's ring

cheapies in four one
why do you try to break gear?
eat purple dog bone

despair and anguish
beauty in a filthy world
truth shall set you free

badass incarnate
I took control from the weak
don't call me false king

I wrote more when I was on zero sleep but it's either not fit for human consumption or not ready for prime time lol.
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby aneed » Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:59 pm

I wrote a poem about AM once. There are 3 parts to it but I only managed 2. Here they are.

Part One:

The Running Lamb ©
By aneed


Run little lamb, run.
Feel the wind on your tail.
Run before you get caught in the gail.
For I shall catch you.

Run tiny lamb, run.
Past trees of yellow.
Away from those eye of mellow.
And then I shall catch you.

Run without fail, my lamb.
For when I catch you,
A tale I shall tell you,
Of how I raped AM in the rain.


Part 2:

A Lamb in the Rain ©
By aneed


I see you walking, in the rain
You hear me walking, your ears are strained
Its a dark night, a loud night, a wet night
Your mind feels scared, your heart beats excite

You see a turn, in the path
I know you walk in, like a telepath
Its a dark alley, a quiet alley, a wet alley
My mind feels greed, my heart feels dark

You know, I know
You want it, I need it,
Its for the best
Forget the rest
Feel the pain tonight
The love of the dark night

You plead without meaning
I see it in your eyes
You cry without feeling
I feel it in your eyes

The lust for one thrust of the robust
The need to overfeed, to be freed

A slip of the finger, a shudder of feeling
The push of a finger, a mouth opens squealing
The twist of a finger, a body falls kneeling

I havent started yet, feel it slide
Its going in! AM cried!

My little Lamb, lying in the rain

The tip, the body, the soul
His hip, his body, went out of control

TAKE IT OUT! TAKE IT OUT! REMOVE IT!
PUT IT BACK! PUT IT BACK! RAVISH ME!

A night of rain and pleasure
A night of rape, of leisure
See AM lie in ectasy
See his elation unsated
"I vant moar," a wail in the night
I look at him, a figure of pain in my sight

Same place, same time tomorrow my lamb?
...yes...master


*Cough*
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby LostMyHeadache » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:16 pm

Thanks for the responses, guys, made for some awesome and amusing reading!
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby theKILLERS77 » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:53 pm

Limerick for ya.

I once met a two blues and a host
Who showed me what they like most
A cloud and a spear
Broke my axe and my gear
But my wand made them smell like burnt toast
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby Niolden » Mon Jan 10, 2011 11:44 pm

That limerick was the sexiest thing I've seen all night.
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby t765234 » Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:04 am

aneed wrote:I wrote a poem about AM once. There are 3 parts to it but I only managed 2. Here they are.

Part One:

The Running Lamb ©
By aneed


Run little lamb, run.
Feel the wind on your tail.
Run before you get caught in the gail.
For I shall catch you.

Run tiny lamb, run.
Past trees of yellow.
Away from those eye of mellow.
And then I shall catch you.

Run without fail, my lamb.
For when I catch you,
A tale I shall tell you,
Of how I raped AM in the rain.


Part 2:

A Lamb in the Rain ©
By aneed


I see you walking, in the rain
You hear me walking, your ears are strained
Its a dark night, a loud night, a wet night
Your mind feels scared, your heart beats excite

You see a turn, in the path
I know you walk in, like a telepath
Its a dark alley, a quiet alley, a wet alley
My mind feels greed, my heart feels dark

You know, I know
You want it, I need it,
Its for the best
Forget the rest
Feel the pain tonight
The love of the dark night

You plead without meaning
I see it in your eyes
You cry without feeling
I feel it in your eyes

The lust for one thrust of the robust
The need to overfeed, to be freed

A slip of the finger, a shudder of feeling
The push of a finger, a mouth opens squealing
The twist of a finger, a body falls kneeling

I havent started yet, feel it slide
Its going in! AM cried!

My little Lamb, lying in the rain

The tip, the body, the soul
His hip, his body, went out of control

TAKE IT OUT! TAKE IT OUT! REMOVE IT!
PUT IT BACK! PUT IT BACK! RAVISH ME!

A night of rain and pleasure
A night of rape, of leisure
See AM lie in ectasy
See his elation unsated
"I vant moar," a wail in the night
I look at him, a figure of pain in my sight

Same place, same time tomorrow my lamb?
...yes...master


*Cough*

uhhh... I suppose the best way to put my response to words would be "WHAT THE F***?!"
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby theKILLERS77 » Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:17 pm

aneed wrote:I wrote a poem about AM once. There are 3 parts to it but I only managed 2. Here they are.

Part One:

The Running Lamb ©
By aneed



Run without fail, my lamb.
For when I catch you,
A tale I shall tell you,
Of how I raped AM in the rain.





What/who is AM? Are you a rapist? Like the guy said above, WTF?!
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby aneed » Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:23 pm

Posting PSNs is not allowed on this site :( AM is half of his PSN.

Anyways, he asked me to... no... he forced me to write that... and write I did... Dear god... write. i. did. Or is it compose? Well, AM appreciated it anyways so its all cool. Me and AM are like brothers so thats even cooler.

If you guys want one then just ask and I shall deliver.
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Re: Demon's Souls Haikus & Poetry

Postby LostMyHeadache » Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:31 pm

Is the second half of the persons PSN 180 by any chance?

I love that guy, long time sparring buddy of mine
a very skilled opponent indeed.
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